1st 1/4: it seems a little easier to understand, a lot clearer but still chaotic. The color of the typeface is working pretty well, I like the teal-green-ish color with all the dark of the image.
3rd and 4th 1/4s: I like the typeface in the 3rd 1/4, I think it might be cool to see it brought in to the 4th a bit? There's a lot of white space at the bottom, maybe that could be useful for a little more of the spiky text?
1st 1/4: it seems a little easier to understand, a lot clearer but still chaotic. The color of the typeface is working pretty well, I like the teal-green-ish color with all the dark of the image.
ReplyDelete3rd and 4th 1/4s: I like the typeface in the 3rd 1/4, I think it might be cool to see it brought in to the 4th a bit? There's a lot of white space at the bottom, maybe that could be useful for a little more of the spiky text?